I haven't been telling you, but I've gone over to the dark side again. That's right. TV. I've been watching some of the "24" episodes. It's no "Lost" (my first love), but I've enjoyed it. After watching the latest episode last night, I've decided that I'm going to try my hand at writing the dialogue between Jack and Chloe. Here goes. Let me know how I'm doing.
JACK: Chloe, I need you to get the (fill in impossible thing) from the (fill in impossible-to-hack-into) computer.
CHLOE: It's going to be impossible.
JACK: I understand.
CHLOE: I'm going to have trouble getting past their firewall.
JACK: I need it in 38 seconds or thousands of people are going to DIE!
CHLOE: All right, I'm working.
JACK: Upload the image to my PDA and call me back.